IceCreamMan

Go here for information and a link: The Society Revisited is the new home of the YWS comunity because this site is shutting down due to lack of funding and ...

Liked this very much, IceCreamMan! Gorgeous images, but it seemed to end a little abruptly. I wanted to keep reading! :twisted: Yea, well I wrote it as filler material for ...

Something from the archives of my life. I think I wrote this a year ago. Enjoy. The Sunset The waning light glanced off the bay piercing the sand near were ...

stealing a couple ideas here and there is perfectly okay, just make sure you don't steal a whole book. What I mean by this is that you should pick out ...

First impression: I liked it. I felt like some of the rhyming was too forced, but to make up for it the imagery and vocabulary are much better than what ...

how about this? (note: the new parts are in italics, the other parts are there so you can see if it flows with the rest of the poem) The pianist ...

Even more now. I have an ending kind of, but I don't really like it and will probably change it later. And, by the way, my reference to being an ...

Okay, I added some stanzas and took out the bad ones. It is not complete yet, but its getting there. Please critique the new version: Floating through the space of ...

I think I just came up with something good to replace the second stanza with, but i'm not going to edit the post until someone reviews this adjustment. Here it ...

Thanks backgroundbob. I seriously was thinking that exact same thing when I was writing it, but for some reason I couldn't come up with a better way of expressing it ...

I prefer Iron Maiden personally, when it comes to metal. But I'm not a big metal fan. To much palm muting on the guitars for my taste. I prefer progressive ...

I'm embarassed... :oops: There's no need to be. The song isn't very well known, for obvious reasons (such as it probably was never recorded or played on the radio or ...

I loved it! That was a beautiful piece of work, it was grabbing and engrossing. I liked the title choice and I think I have some idea of why you ...

4’33” edited version 4’33”, the epic piece, no fingers ever grace the keys. So silent is the performance that for a short period of time the audience realizes the chaos ...

I think that JK Rowlings writing has no where near as much depth as Tolkein's, which is why it is much more accessible to the average reader. Tolkein created an ...