Icaruss

Thanks for the comments. I corrected the "living" thing, first for pointing that out. I don't tend to re-read my stuff.

It's a nice piece of writing. Nothing extremely good, but it's nice, and it has potential. BUT: By sheer misfortune, I had been caught in a traffic jam for the ...

Johnny placed one of his hands in his buttcheek, and giggled, like a kid who wants a lollypop, and cries, and cries, and cries, and cries, until his parents, who ...

“Somebody should do something with these bastards.” Edward complains, while ignoring the small child –probably eight, or nine- who is knocking his window, with a pleading look upon his face. ...

Damn you, Sophie! DAAAAAAAMN YOUUU!!! *ahem* Anybody else wants to give it a read?

I guess it wasn't on Tuesday... but that's cool. I can wait...

^Guns n' Roses! *smacks whoever doesn't know Sweet Child O' Mine 's lyrics* Oh... and you don't have a sig, so I'll just give ElectricBlueMonkey another 10/10.

I didn't meant to sound harsh... or... unprofessional... I'm not saying that the story sucks because IT WAS WRITTEN BY a 12 year old, I'm just saying it's not good. ...

Oh God! I can't believe you're back! It's been a WHILE! ... OK. I don't know you.

Who isn't?

Ajax

Three people are in a sidewalk, besides a new car they just bought. One of them takes out a camera and gives it to one of the other two, for ...

Good job. Great personal piece. Good use of the metaphors... beautifully written. Like the other member said, it's very poetic. Too bad I find those kinds of things boring. But ...

Here's the tutorial, for anybody who cares. The link doesn't work, and I'm too lazy to delete it. Because of the debacle that was the RPG and Games section from ...

NO! NO! NO! NOT THE SPECTRUM! NOT PHYSICS! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!! 9/10 ... or... 1/10 ... because it reminds me of school. But whichever you prefer.