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Re: Last Night Tonight
Last Night Tonight One Act Play Stage is completely dark. A voice is heard: CORMAC: Can I get a drink over here? Lights up. It’s a small place, in the ...
Jan 9, 2009 -
Re: Writing as a back flash
You can do whatever you want, really. It's your story. Just make sure the reader understand. The reader doesn't mind you being mean to him as long as it all ...
Jan 7, 2009 -
Re: Bad Weather.
policeman came out of the blue (no pun intended) here and I don't think it matches the tone of the piece. 'cop' would do better. You speak the truth. Both ...
Jan 7, 2009 -
Re: Who are your influences?
Quentin Tarantino: meandering conversations, hard-boiled criminals talking like real people. Irvine Welsh: multiple perspectives, people narrating like they're talking to you. Ernest Hemingway: really
Jan 5, 2009 -
Re: Abusing your Muse
You know when you're writing a lot? And you're excited? And you write like fifty pages in a day? And you're sweating and typing like crazy and tackling every plot ...
Jan 5, 2009 -
Re: The Lights Begin To Twinkle (revised)
Oh, this made me sad. Not the story. Not the characters or the situation. It made me sad because it began with such promise. It drew you in instantly. The ...
Jan 5, 2009 -
Re: Bad Weather.
Bad Weather . Rain. It is cold but not as cold as it used to be. The car is shrinking by the minute, getting more uncomfortable, I can’t breathe. I ...
Jan 5, 2009 -
Re: What is Your Favorite Part of Writing?
Finishing a story, obviously. Everything else is a pain in the butt. Coming up with an idea is also pretty cool.
Dec 19, 2008 -
Re: Survey
1.Total number of books you own? Like, thirty-something. 2.What was the last book you bought? The script from the movie "Dioses." But that was just to see a movie script ...
Dec 10, 2008 -
Re: Outline?
It'd be nice to think that I'm the cool, rebel writer that sits down and writes whatever comes to mind, but it's hard for me to finish anything remotely good ...
Dec 10, 2008 -
Re: Unique ways to creat names.
I just choose the most mundane names possible. Anything exotic sounds exotic. When has anybody ever met anybody named Avellina or Xerxes? Unless I wanna make a point (like people ...
Dec 3, 2008 -
Re: Having a problem refining an idea into a story.
Do a story outline. No, no, no, wait. I have a better idea. Usually, these ideas come with a cool scene already thought out. So, write out that scene. You ...
Nov 27, 2008 -
Re: No Chat-Speak
This is total crap. Language is what people make of it, it's not really fair to impose. You can tell people, hey, you're doing it wrong but banning them is ...
Nov 27, 2008 -
Re: Advanced Critiques Questions
Doesn't posting your story by chapters defeat the whole purpose of the Advanced Critiques section?
Nov 25, 2008 -
Re: Choose a hero
And how can someone be a half-dragon anyways? Aren't dragons really big? How can a woman have sex with a dragon? That's impossible, not to mention quite perverted.
Oct 25, 2008
