Icaruss

They ask me why I do it... y'know, dress as a bird and fight crime, and all... I just tell them I do it for the kids. For them to ...

Dragon? Boy, I didn't see that one coming. Kangaroos will stomp on your graves, Young Writers, on your graves!

I can't believe GriffinKeeper was the first one who said it. This is a baaaad story. Wait. He... talked about bad writing conditions... OK. Then I'm probably the first one ...

The dialogue is mildly funny, but you don't totally dominate the "awkward situation" scene entirely. Yes. I just said "awkward situation" as if its some kind of writing genre, but ...

That was really good. No, seriously, that was amazing. Your rythm, and your choice of language just help the reader get into the feelings you try -or at least I ...

The Masked Crusading , according to The Hawk. It’s not that hard to do. You know, saving the world and all. Everybody keeps praising us, for what we do, like ...

The last part is the start of the story... Sorry. I just like to mix up the storylines. That's why the last sentence is the first --and that's why I ...

Sunday Sunlight It wasn’t long till I found out where the bastard was. He was standing there, wearing them as if no one noticed. I sent him the look, but ...

Actually it does sound cliched, and I don't even read romance. I think that you could pull this off as a comedy. Other than that it will probably end up ...

That's a cool setting for a novel and all but... Are you gonna quit school...? Cause if you are... don't. Not a good idea.

I'm supposed to pay up now, aren't I? Thanks for the crit. I corrected some of the things you pointed out. Like the missing question mark when Eddy starts to ...

Here you go. Anybody, please. How about it? I have so many unused points I can give them away as quickly as I can give my... my... I didn't think ...

Black Sabbath

Circo Beat Some bastard is pissing, against a wall. The yellowish liquid bounces away, and flows towards some bum holding a piece of cardboard that reads: “I am blind. Help ...

American Psycho , by Bret Easton Ellis. I'm also rereading Kingdom Come , by Mark Waid (and the great Alex Ross), which is always good.