Icaruss

I'm a mean cat. But I don't make a hassle unless someone wants me to make a hassle, do you follow? I won't go picking on people, I'll tell you ...

Thanks a lot. That's probably one of the most helpful crits I've ever gotten. But you got to keep in mind this is just the start of the storyline, so ...

This was amusing. I've done pure dialogue stuff, too. What you got to try and do is keep the conversational tone, but at the same time giving as much information ...

I wrote this for my school magazine, which I edit and write most of the articles for. It's called the Markham Wings. I wrote this a while ago. Markham Wings ...

Swim. That light. I should go towards it, and then maybe I won't have to swim anymore. Swim. That light. I should go towards it, and then maybe I won't ...

When I do outline (that is, when I'm writing a comicbook script or a long story I've got already figured out and just want to have clear in my head) ...

This is just the first segment (there's like twelve) of an unfinished short story. Right now, there's not much to 'R' it other than language, but it will get pretty ...

I've written romantic stories, but they're mostly pretty crude. You know, not mushy-mushy stuff, but things about phillandering, and failed romances, or one night flings, or guys... who feel guilty ...

You know... I just can't stop thinking about that colored kid Red killed. Back in the bank? I mean... I reckon I understand why he did, he told him not ...

Sounds like a Hallmark movie about some sports champion with cancer. It's OK. "Brotherly Arms."

What is your major malfunction, numbnuts? Exactly .

John Mills?? Detective John Mills.

That was great. I haven't read fantasy in a long time, but that paragraph really eased you into the story. I like how you described his wings, without actually saying ...

Yeah, you have to plan an ending. I mean, not before you write the story up, but at least while you're typing a way, you have to have some idea ...

I'm talking about plot-twists, revelations, sudden deaths, sudden kisses and the such. Many times, something that should be really shocking, comes in a way which makes it seems inconsequential. This ...