Icaruss

One time, I used something I'm really proud of: A character is driving to meet up his friends. They're robbing a store that day. He is thinking about his past, ...

Dude, sorry... But that's not a novel. That's a really long short-story, or a really short novella. I mean, good for you... But it's not a novel. Congratulations anyways.

I like some animals. I mean, dogs. Cats give me the creeps. Not because they're scary or anything, but because they always look like they know more than you do. ...

Oh, how funny! He's gay! And why is this Rated R? Because there's gayness involved? Oh, lord.

Hate? A SS Officer? You shouldn't make him hate jews. You should make him believe in the Nazi principles, make him genuinely believe that he is doing good, but don't ...

You just delete it from the interwebz before submitting.

This is cute. And of course she is an aspiring author. I was too. The same way I was an aspiring firefighter and police officer. The same way I was ...

I guess it's supposed to happen. But that doesn't change the fact that it's a sad thing, right? I mean, you've been with these people almost all your life, and ...

Lolita.

So. "Brotherly Arms" is nowhere near finished and I'm already kinda stuck. So, I'm taking a break from that and going back to my roots. That is, depressing first-person narrative ...

Touched By Fire is the best English poem anthology ever made. It's the one used for the international GCSE program.

Your character is a little brat. Other than that, it was fine. I don't know if I can call it interesting, I mean, it's only a paragraph long. But I'd ...

This I loved. This is great. I like that the character doesn't want to be charitable, I like the fact that you can make something which by definition shouldn't be ...

The Evil Witch/Bitch. The Emotionless Bookworm Which Actually Feels. A Lot. The Whore With The Heart of Gold. The Attractive But Mannish Girl Who Likes To Armwrestle.

Thanks a lot. That's probably one of the most helpful crits I've ever gotten. But you got to keep in mind this is just the start of the storyline, so ...