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Re: Jackie Lawton's Tower
All About the Fire, Dead Signals and Jack Lawton. By George Mills 1 : There’s a big pile of junk out on Jack Lawton’s backyard. He says he’ll use it ...
Nov 1, 2007 -
Re: historical fiction: how much can I fudge?
Just don't say it's Auswichtz.
Nov 1, 2007 -
Re: Untitled
Man, I'm really glad more people read this. And yeah, I'm aware of the nonsensical sentences. They're just typos. I think I typed this directly to the post, I mean, ...
Oct 30, 2007 -
Re: t
Wait. I misread. Yeah, you can't drink in the car, but then you say you can't smoke either. I guess it is confusing then. I don't get it.
Oct 29, 2007 -
Re: Sunny Days
I liked it a lot. It's nice, and short. Not very helpful, I know, just wanted to make you feel good.
Oct 29, 2007 -
Re: A Life
Why is this here? It should be in the "Other Fiction" Category since, yeah, it's unusual, but not unusual enough not to be considered fiction. And, hey, first chapters are ...
Oct 29, 2007 -
Re: t
Sorry, but I didn't like this. It was just too boring. The way you narrated, it seemed monotonous and bleak. Maybe that was your intention, I don't know, but it ...
Oct 29, 2007 -
Re: Critique the Person Above You!
The Stranded
Oct 28, 2007 -
Re: The Stranded
Well... I don't know. I didn't find it that funny. The whole point of the play seems to be the narrator, and I just didn't find him that funny. I ...
Oct 28, 2007 -
Re: In Need of Help
So, alright. I know nobody cares or anything, but I just need to ramble about some things. I find myself knee-deep in half-finished stories and I need your help. Lately, ...
Oct 28, 2007 -
Re: Memento Mori
Yeah, I know she didn't copy that story or anything. I just find it annoying when I've chosen a title and it's already been used by some other guy.
Oct 28, 2007 -
Re: What do you like to see in a book?
Drugs. Sex. Alcohol. You know, the works.
Oct 28, 2007 -
Re: Memento Mori
Don't know if this is of any significance at all, but there's a pretty good and somewhat known short story called Memento Mori. It was written by Christopher Nolan's brother, ...
Oct 28, 2007 -
Re: First Paragraph Feedback
I don't know. I never like it when the first-person narrative tells a story. I mean, I know that sounds confusing but what I meant to say is that I ...
Oct 27, 2007 -
Re: Stephen King No Plot Debate
I always plot, but not on detail and it's never written in stone. I need a guideline to keep moving, or else I'll hit a block too early on. Maybe ...
Oct 27, 2007
