Icaruss

Oh, come on now, people swear. Sometimes people tell me that I've used swearwords just to use swearwords, and hell, they may be right. Sometimes they just make a frase ...

Oh, God. I'm going to try to be honest here without trying to be mean or unkind. I always feel guilty about writing these kinds of reviews because, after all, ...

Oh, this is great. It is funny. Not bad funny but the rhyming and the words you choose really transmit the joy you're feeling. Like, we're happy about the fact ...

Yeah, I know it's really weird. I'd never really written a poem before and I just vomited it straight to the post, singing the words for the melody of "Just ...

I cannot explain the situation you've placed me in, Like, seriously, baby, I wouldn't even know where to begin. I just look around and see the things you've left behind, ...

PAGE ONE (5 panels, thin panels going from the top to bottom of the page) Panel 1 . We get a really red face. And it looks like she’s in ...

That was good. I mean, there are a couple of things I would change, but overall it's a good little piece. The idea you had about the glass being filthy ...

Anybody else want to read it?

I struggled to read this. It felt like a chore. Now, that doesn't necessary means it's bad, it's just not my kind of story. And it's not the plot, or ...

=D I'd be happy with you critiquing any of my stories. No one ever seems to read my stuff. Be mean if you must.

Fixed the customer thing. Thanks for pointing that out.

No, I mean, you don't have to change it just 'cause I said so. What the hell do I know about good stories? Seriously, if you wanted to write a ...

Hello. I have a pretty big story if you want to review it. It's called The Edge of a Straight Razor , and it's about 14000 words long. I'd understand ...

This was fantastic. You have the voice of a really hard-boiled police procedural writer. The dialogue is good, and feels authentic, which is the most important thing. You don't have ...

THE BED. Today is a Monday. That means it’s Sarah’s turn. She is a screamer. Most of them just do their business, shuffle around on top of me, and let ...