Icaruss

First of all: The title is really good. Not only because it sounds funny and it's obviously quite... catchy, but because its silly and B-Moviesh, which really isn't the feel ...

Tangled Up In Blue is a three-part Romantic Story. Can you pleaaaase crit that?

First sentences in, I already notice what your problem is: you give unnecesary information. It's not that you write bad, or that your story is boring, it's just that you ...

Oh! Oh! Me! Me! I've got a three part story, is that OK? Tangled Up In Blue . EDIT: I just noticed you reviewed my überlong story in the Advanced ...

The best workshops, I believe, are the more liberal ones. Every one writes what they want, read it to the rest, and then the whole class actively works to make ...

Algae are people too!

I got a three part Romantic Fiction story I recently posted called Tangled Up In Blue . You can review that if you want to. Please want to?

TANGLED UP IN BLUE New Year[s] . Cal Towney wakes up to find Ashley Bateman’s side of the bed empty. He stands up. Walks around the room. It doesn’t take ...

Part two is posted.

TANGLED UP IN BLUE TOM . Things were good, which basically meant that Ashley wasn’t getting any ideas. Most girls think that just because a guy is living with them ...

This is part one of three, so you will read more. =D

TANGLED UP IN BLUE CAL . Remember when you told me that—? No, well, of course you don’t. Sorry, silly question. It’s just that I always find myself thinking about ...

I haven't read this (though I did read the parts you posted on the Other Fiction section), but I skimmed through it. One quick comment: don't put the flashbacks in ...

Whoa. I'm on the Featured Works thingamajingydingy. I wrote this fairly quickly, I'm really thrilled you guys liked it so much. Thanks a lot.

Break-Up . Anniversary . If you'd be so kind.