Icaruss

Algae are people too! I hope you're kidding. No, I like this idea, if it would work. Undoubtedly, though, and I'm not sure if Icaruss is kidding or not, people ...

Animals are people too!

bad

You know, fantasy fiction and science fiction are probably the hardest things to write. It works when the magic and the, you know, fantasy is simply there, omniprescent, but subtle ...

I got a three-part story called Tangled Up In Blue. 1: 2: 3: I will gladly review both of your pieces. Thank you!

My first suggestion would be to get rid of the shooting. Sure, "My brother,/had a gun" is a great way to end the poem, but Snoik is right, it seems ...

(shameless bump, thinly disguised as "thank-yous" to the critiques)

First, before I talk about whether you write good or not, before I discuss character development and plot, before I comment on dialogue and structure, I have to say that ...

I know you have a lot on your plate already, but if you could please spare time to review my three-part story " Tangled Up In Blue ", I'd be ...

I know you have a lot to do already, but if you can... It's a three-part story. It's called Tangled Up In Blue, and it's from the Romance Section. You ...

Please? It's a three-part story. It's called Tangled Up In Blue, and it's from the Romance Section. You can review the three parts, or just the first one, whatever you ...

If you feel you can't do anything with the story anymore, and feel like you're just filling up pages, then leave it alone. Don't delete it, maybe you'll change your ...

Supercalifragilisticexpialidocious?

Dudes. Done and done. Gimmie some more.

I didn't forget about you: Invasion of the Penis Snatchers, man.