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Re: Does this sound halfway decent?
If people live in the real world, why are all the names sounding like they've been pulled from some fantasy book? Just saying.
Aug 11, 2008 -
Re: craziest night of writing you have ever experienced?
I wrote for about two hours then went to sleep. Woke up in the middle of the night. Summer, so I'm sweating like crazy. Can't go back to sleep. I ...
Aug 11, 2008 -
Re: Out of Focus [Edited 8/29/08]
Random Though #569: First review in ages. Bear with me. I may get sentimental. I've been reading a lot of books lately, two by Cormac McCarthy and Irvine Welsh's latest. ...
Aug 10, 2008 -
Re: The Critique... Click?
Haven't checked this in ages. I will be doing JFW1415's piece and any others that are posted after this (sorry spaced_out but I haven't the slightest idea what HSM is). ...
Aug 10, 2008 -
Re: The Dark Knight
It's #1 on IMDB's Top 250 movies list right now, which I think is ridiculous. Look, I loved the movie as much as anyone, but it's not the best movie ...
Jul 19, 2008 -
Re: Does this have any potential?
Yeah, but he was a struggling artist and his first attempt to make a big revolution and stuff failed miserably. He also lacked social skills. That's the kind of thing ...
Jul 4, 2008 -
Re: Big Changes To Storybooks
Though I don't think the point fine is necessary. Making it a rule to write long, well articulated posts should be enough. I've been in a lot of RPGs forums, ...
Jul 4, 2008 -
Re: Does this have any potential?
Reminds me of the HIS DARK MATERIALS trilogy. You know, the Golden Compass and such. But other than that, any story has potential. This one can be really interesting, even ...
Jul 4, 2008 -
Re: I Got A Really Good Idea
But it's a little bit convulted. Just gonna put it here to see if it makes any sense: enter Robert Smaldon. He's a low profile comic-book writer, working for hire ...
Jul 4, 2008 -
Re: Immortality, Wealth, Sex, and Power.
You have a really cynical view of the world, but you have no reason to feel that way. I'll give you the more formal critique of the piece in a ...
Jul 4, 2008 -
Re: Writer's block smashed to pieces!
That's happened to me too. Well, I never actually stop writing, but there seems to be times where all I'm doing is revising old work and not actually producing anything. ...
Jun 28, 2008 -
Re: Linda
Piece of Advice: don't try to justify an explain your work, or apologize when someone doesn't like it. There will always be people who like it and people who don't. ...
Jun 28, 2008 -
Re: Prose That Makes Me Puke
Tolkien is as entretaining as gouging your own eyeballs out.
Jun 26, 2008 -
Re: Rydia's Reviews
Kitty! I loved the critique you gave me for my Advanced Critique section novella a while back, so here I am again, begging for another: I got a three-part story ...
Jun 26, 2008 -
Re: Abortions.
Random Thought #3: If I got my girlfriend pregnant I wouldn't make her have an abortion. I would probably send her boxing. Or sign her up for some rugby lessons. ...
Jun 25, 2008
