IanFlores

It'd good, it has good visuals and good flow and really nice meaning could really relate to it and i find those are the best ( sorry for sounding redundant ...

Even though it was put in the wrong section I'm glad you did it! Keep on writing!

Very sweet i thought the only real part that i didn't like was "Blue-green eyes the size of stones" just the stones is'nt all that descriptive. Good job though! Keep ...

hahaha very nice and thought out. 36. Burn something. Something big. That's defiantly my favorite ( not that I'm some crazy arsonist). You're very ambitious and I hope you get ...

Very good imagery and rhyming. Perhaps we should not talk like this, Tongues so laced with candid wish; Or look into each other eyes, And reading there such sweet demise. ...

Just a thing I wrote because I was bored it's a sonnet so yeah. Pale moon light glistening across your face Hand in hand we watch as the stars shimmer ...