Iamyoursacrifice

Forgotten Fallen is telling the truth, it shouldn't be celebrated that much. If anything not at all... I just went over a picture of my boyfriend using ms paint tools, ...

I took a picture I had and turned it into a cartoon using ms paint. Took me a long time well a few hours... detail is hard to do! *Image ...

I think it could be better but I do kinda like this one. I got the drawing diagrams from 'The Monster book of Manga' but the additions like the features ...

Hello, forgottenfallen, I saw some small errors in your work and decided to edit them so they fit better. You can choose not to use my editted text, you might ...

I must admit I really like this story, I'm not very good at seeing corrections so it's difficult for me to try and find fault with it. I want you ...

Maybe.... :) He did go through it and edit it with me. He did miss bits though, I was reading through it last night and I found loads of little ...

“Hi Sapphire!” He exclaimed holding his bags of groceries. I ran over and took some of the bags out of his hands. I took them into the kitchen. “So, do ...

This story can be gory in parts so good luck stomaching it! Tell me what you think. All comments will be taken to heart and I shall be correcting nightly. ...

DOES ANYONE ELSE THINK THAT THE YWS PANDA LOOKS LIKE THE SEXUAL HARRASEMENT PANDA FROM SOUTH PARK? Your views are welcome on this subject, you can also tell me that ...

I love Doctor Who, I can't believe David Tennant left. Has anyone got the scoop on why he actually did it? I think it might of been this Hamlet production ...

This story is really good forgotten fallen there are only a few points I would like to acknowledge. So here we go... It seems you write in a style where ...

I know that, forgotten I know when I was born! I just did it wrong on the thingy. I'll change it.

Hi ForgottenFallen I personally think you're good writer but if you're stuck I think I know what you should do. You should have Tempest screaming because his blood is poisoned. ...

I really do like this story, welldone on creating such an interesting storyline, but you have missed some simple punctuation at the beginning of the story such as( ", )it ...

Yet again I know this is awful, but please tell me what is wrong, correct me, guide me I need help! :) What am I to you? I am your ...