Iamnotperfect

Hi I do agree with some of the things that you said and this is the reason why I made changes to the poem that I would like you to ...

Hi, I like the imagery that you used in this stanzas: It fills my insides, Turning me black. Like a poison, It bleeds through my veins. My breath is ice, ...

He was driving smoothly; everything was still at first, than I said something that broke that sense of serenity, now I know that this is from where it started. It ...

Hi if I have to be honest I feel like there is nothing that distinguishes this poem from all the other ones that talk about love and maybe is because ...

Hi I am not going to correct any grammatical error since all the other people have done so. For it to be your second poem I actually like and I ...

Hi I really enjoyed reading this poem and to be honest I can't really find anything wrong with it. Overall nice work, keep writing ;)

Hi I didn't really have time to red the other comments but I will tell you what I think. I understand the point of the poem but I think you ...

Sure thing in this life is Death, moving unexpectedly without a warning. He doesn't give you a rest, he runs after you, he steals your life. The world is evolving, ...

Hola I like this poem and the way it flows, for some reason it reminds me expressions that you would hear from a dramatic movie. I really like the way ...

Hi CreativeFreak thanks for the punctuation adjustments they were actually needed and to be honest I was in a rush when I sent it, also I am happy that you ...

Rumors, cars, people, mischievous faces, attentiveness, train terminates. Language, differences, never quietness, monotony, people talking, saying nothing; throughout silence eyes define everyone. Acc

Hi I like the repetition that I see in the poem I think it kind of gives it a consistency and it expresses a feeling and opinions that many people ...

Actually now that I think about it how did she end up with Mike?! One of the most annoying characters ... that's strange, hmm I personally would prefer if Bella ...

Hi I really like the way you are rewriting the story and its becoming more interesting and realistic as it goes on. I think that since you mentioned Jacob you ...

Hi I just wrote this poem a few minutes ago and it just expresses some of the feelings that I felt today in a moment of anger, so I might ...