Iamnotperfect

Hi if I have to be honest I don't like so much repetition either. I don't really like this stanza: Ugly Mirror, Pretty mirror, My dear love and fear; Pity ...

Hi I like this poem. I think that the simplicity of your writing made it worth reading. In addition to this the emotion is there and I can relate to ...

Hi, I like this poem. You use very nice imagery, good use of language and vocabulary although I still think there's some emotion missing, but that's just me. I really ...

Hi, if I have to be honest I think the poem is not very striking. You don't really make clear what it's happening or happened between the poet and the ...

Hi I think you put across the message of the poem very well. When I started reading it I felt like it was something a bit of a cliche but ...

Hi, I like the way you started it but I think the poem lacks of description, I know it's not a story but for example in this line: you came ...

Hi, I really like this poem. Very good flow and it's good that the emotion was there as well. Also good use of rhyming and consistency throughout. I like your ...

Hi there I agree with Skins, the poem is nice and to be honest I can relate to it because I had the exact same experience this is the reason ...

Spent so much time with you, can't even remember how we met, age hasn't its fault, yes we are still about to blossom. Who knew you would've become the keeper ...

Hi, thanks for the grammar corrections although I wasn't planning to put any punctuations I just wanted to express the way I felt on the moment, next time I'll make ...

Hi I actually like it. I don't agree with people saying that you need to put it in the poem format because in my opinion poems shouldn't be cliche or ...

Stress is taking over me what an effect so dried out so exhausted just like a cigarette about to finish I need to scream,laugh, cry what a state of confusion ...

Hi I like this poem, it has a good rhyming scheme and it flows very nicely. I like some of the similitude you have used: Unlocking future like a key, ...

Thanks for the comments :)

I judged you but I was wrong my mistakes aren't few don't know why it took me long. My eyes were cold when I didn't know I was wrong when ...