Iamnotperfect

Thinking knowledge is a good thing is right, thinking you know more than anyone is wrong, I say this because poor me was too ignorant at the time to recognize ...

Hi, to be honest I find the poem quite cliche, it's nice but I have heard all the things you said so many times and I don't think that's your ...

Hi Thank you ... about the "you" at the start it wasn't referring to the author but the actual person, sorry I should have made it clearer. Regarding the detail ...

Do you know what hurts the most, knowing that there is hypocrisy in this world and knowing that you are one of them. When you promised me that something, I ...

Thank you ... and yes winter is my favourite season to meditate:)

On this beautiful night ... Here I am walking alone in the dark where I finally found some peace, where I can contemplate in my thoughts, this relaxing atmosphere is ...

Great I am up for it :D

Hi I actually enjoyed reading this poem. I like this part: No one knows its story, or why such a smile can appear to cry. But they bend and beg ...

Hi I really like your poem it's like a breeze of fresh air. To be honest when I started reading the first line I didn't really like it but as ...

Hi there there are things that I like about this poem and others where I think you need some improvement. Starting from the first stanza: Icey, silver glitters of frost, ...

Hi there, I really like this poem. I do agree with all your points and the poem has a a meaning to it, also I can feel the frustration of ...

Voices, chaos,ideas I try to say something but is almost like being invisible. this constraint of not being able to be heard; I try to understand as they talk I ...

Hi I think that as a first try the poem was good. I don't really agree with people talking about punctuation like is a must since this is not a ...

Hi I don't really have any criticism, the poem is simple and the idea behind it is good. Keep it up :-)

Hi I enjoyed reading this poem. You are really good at describing images and capturing the moment with the use of good vocabulary. I love the way you started the ...