Iamnotperfect

I put so much energy on my work that I forgot what was really important, time was going fast and I was anaware of her disease, that monster that was ...

Well I don't really have much to add to the above review. All I want to say is that the poem flows nicely for me however there is a part ...

Well I don't really have much to add to the above review. All I want to say is that the poem flows nicely for me however there is a part ...

Thanks for the constructive review Lauraxc, I'll surely try to improve it :-)

thank you :-)

Hi, I don't know how to define this but one thing is for sure ... I keep on coming back to it because it's just so much humor !!! :D

Hi thanks everyone for your help ... all your suggestions were good but for some reason this is the title that was most imprinted in my mind :) As everyone ...

Hi, thanks for the reviews. PaperNessa ... sorry I meant armor, the problem is that I speak Italian where you translate armor into "armatura" I am now assuming that you ...

She lays still in her bed, waiting for the angel of death to come, to steal her soul. She's weak, I stand there by her side in silence, ignorant to ...

Hi, I just wrote this poem on the go but feel free to give your opinion. I sit still on this chair, so confused, so alone salty cascades of water ...

Hi, I think you started off with the poem very effectively but then the flow had an upside down, for me at least. I understand what you mean with this ...

Although I am young ... I'd say approximately 6 month old, I really enjoyed being part of the YWS. It's so nice to know that there is so many other ...

Hi, I quite like the poem however I prefer the first stanza to the second one. The first stanza strikes me more and the message of the poem is clearer. ...

Hi Thanks for the useful comments and grammar nitpicks, I always forget to proofread :) ... About the poem I just wanted to express the fact that ignorance doesn't just ...

Hi for some reason I just had to comment on this poem ;) Normally people tend to use repetition but it doesn't really work however I think that you used ...