Iamnotperfect

Hello, this is a nice poem however it is missing something which I cannot explain. It is quite confusing in that I am not sure about who the poet is ...

Hello, I really like this short story. It is quite different from others which I have read before and this can only be a good thing.The story is unique and ...

Hello nice poem, I just have to comment on this piece as I have been part of the cast of the Tempest "Shakespeare" and was one of the spirits who ...

Hello, I enjoyed reading this short story. It was fun, straight to the point and it can be aimed at a wide range of readers t. In addition, it was ...

Hello, I liked this poem, I am sure many people can connect to it. I really like this part of the poem: I went through life thinking it was normal, ...

Hello, I found this short story quite fun. May I suggest you to reduce the amount of times you tend to repeat the name "Jeremy" throughout because it ruins the ...

Hi, I like this poem, is simple and descriptive :)

Hello, thanks for the reviews I'll take your advices in consideration and Sassykat your interpretation of my poem is exactly what I meant :)

Hi, firstly I liked the poem and secondly I will only comment on the content rather than grammar, as that is something I am sure you will be able to ...

Hi I liked the poem. It was simple and to the point, fortunately it wasn't one of the many cliche type of poems that I always read about love, though ...

Memories of her starving to see us eat, memories of her sick and weak, memories of how hard it was to take action, there was no limit to time, days ...

This is so original and I would so not feel bored to read it again and again, just simply hilarious haha. Good work :)

Hi, regarding the poem I don't really feel emotionally connected to it. I feel like it is dry and you should put more sentiment in it . It just seems ...

Thank you

Hi I think the idea behind the poem is good however I am sure you can expand these sentences so much more. The way you split the stanzas is good ...