IamArt

Thank you so much for another great review! It's amazing how many grammar things you can miss, so thank you for pointing them out to me. Wish there was a ...

Thank you, the "thee" was a total typing mistake, so thanks for bringing it to my attention. I've been a little concerned with this one cause I've heard some people ...

There is no difference, between night and day, day is just night playing backwards. There is no difference between sun streaked skies. And hotness to coldness. Coldness to hot. The ...

I wish I had more time right now to give a proper review, but I had to take a few seconds to let you know that I loved this!

Very good, very interesting subject matter, very intense, mature and dramatic. I would probably re-do the typing, like put it in stanzas or something. The third from last sentence seems ...

I like this poem so much and I really really agree with you, I feel this way myself! Only question is the "broken winged bird" analogy (sounds like Hughes' "Dreams"), ...

I like the way you used your words here, I wonder though what is it that the speaker is longing for. That's about the only thing I can think of.

This was honestly very good, I like that it's so short you can easily remember it and say it to yourself often. Very nice rhythm and word flow. It makes ...

I am a fan of this poem alot, I think it is thought-provoking and meaningful, I only wish it were a tad bit longer, but some of the best poems ...

VERSE 1 I wake up and I feel the sunrise in my chest you peak at me and I'm on tiptoes, over the fence the days will break and weeks ...

Thank you guys so much, I will be sure to check that next time; I was typing it so quickly when I thought of it, in second-hand and forgot to ...

i should tell u about everything/ all the people and the funny dreams/ i should tell u about how i lost you and me/i should tell you till i can't ...

Hey zerkk, I'm really glad you joined and hope I can be of help and fun to you while you're here. We're about the same age (i'm 16). I'd love ...

Welcome...hey you! -just kidding ;) I am glad that you have joined YWS and hope you have fun here. I've just started coming bakc up here myself after an brief ...

Hello BeckFletch! I will start off by saying that the chorus is indeed the strongest part of the song, I can feel the rhythm of it in my head. It ...