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These are so good I feel like a terrible artist hehe... I'm not that good with drawing anything except toony trees... Well, I really just speak my mind and all ...

Great! Interesting... Sounds kind of like Sundays at Tiffany's or whatever it was... I actually haven't read or seen it but I get the general idea of that story... But, ...

Great! I don't know what it was particularly, but this kept my interest through the whole thing... I rarely remember my dreams... Well, it doesn't seem like you'll be adding ...

In advance, I was writing for up to four hours nonstop on the first one for 9 days or so, and I didn't stop to correct errors often... I went ...

Awesome! I'm not that good of a critic, but I'd say maybe more descriptions on the characters would be nice. I'm not one to talk though, as I have about ...

The numbers in parenthesis represent people I have not thought of names for yet. (nation1) and (nation2) are basically the same as the names, although I have thought of (nation3), ...

Great! Loved it. I sorta want to know what happens after that but in some stories it's simply better not knowing. Great writing. If it were to be a full ...

Thanks for the review, you were right about the names... I thought of a few names but I'm still missing some. I'm debating whether I should "edit" it and add ...

GREAT! I'm not a very good critic and I guess that's why I didn't see any problems, but I thought it was pretty good. I'm guessing that if you want ...

Before I start, I'll warn you that while you're reading you may notice large gaps in the storyline. I am currently adding these parts in, as I feel I will ...