IKnowAll

I'd like to thank the few people who've commented on chapter one, as it has helped me not only improve that chapter, but make this one better to begin with. ...

Hehehe... Fabulously creepy! Don't know what else to say. Keep writing and have fun!

here, I have others that I'd like to be reviewed, but This one most of all. Please get back to me soon! -IKnowAll

Well, I'd say you're right, but that there's another side to it as well. Destiny in my opinion is guided by, as you said, actions, but also luck, which in ...

Storm I slouched against one of the few trees left in the forest. The charred ruins of a forest flourishing with life only hours ago were all I could see ...

I'm bad at reviews, so I won't be able to help you improve... But I'll boost your confidence! Great job! Definitely worth the read!

Hehehe... I used to be really annoying... Now I'm just a little annoying... On the good days hehe. Although I was a pretty big hypocrite when I was little, people ...

Snow, huh? I wouldn't be surprised if she made up the name. She didn't seem to be lying, but the fact that she wouldn't give a last name was suspicious... ...

Interesting, I couldn't help but wonder... On the part where you said something like "the crowd was silent, but it didn't say anything" did you mean that the fact that ...

Um... one of my stories is between 12+ and 16+... So I don't know what to rate it as. It's super long but uses both of the "B words" in ...

I think you were right about "their" but it was actually supposed to be "county" (a county is a group of cities or something...) not country. thanks for the review! ...

Great! I love this, when you're done you should divide it into smaller chapters, till then, keep writing! I noticed some double negatives at the beginning, though... And a few ...

Great! Loved it, can't wait for more! Being a terrible critic, I don't see anything wrong with it other than a few grammatical errors, things to be rephrased, and the ...

Sounds good so far, but it doesn't seem like you'll be adding to this any time soon... Too bad... Sounded pretty interesting...

I don't remember most of that day. I remember getting off that boat. Onto an island; shell island. With assorted bushes and grasses throughout it's surface. I remember the joy ...