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There's a few places where I guess grammar could be improved, but I don't know how to do that quote thing yet. But you've still written this very well. I ...

Very gripping start. I look forward to reading the next few chapters, I don't know what to say about the storyline... well, keep writing, I guess. I see a lot ...

Hey people, I've had this typed for awhile, and was trying to finish up the chapter, but today I decided I could just have it from storm's view in the ...

Awww I love this, great work! I wish I could write romance, at least as a side plot. But at the end was she supposed to be a hallucination or ...

Hmmm... I can't decide what mine would be. Pretty cool though. I really don't know what else to say...

Good job, can't wait to see more, I noticed some errors, but if they were anything important I'd remember them. Well, I'd like to say I thoroughly enjoyed that. Keep ...

Creepy... Only problem I noticed was that you should add quotation marks, and when it says everyone laughed, wouldn't the person being insulted not laugh? Just sayin'. Well, have a ...

Fabulously creepy! I always like this kind of poetry! Perfect for little kids. MUAHAHAHAHA! Seriously though, good job. Pat yourself on the back, and have a good day. -IKnowAll

Good picture! Well, at least in my standards. Hehehe. My camera isn't nearly that good... It's pretty cool that you can say that openly though, most people are secretive about ...

Okay! So here's the summary of up to this point... Storm and Angel, evolved humans from a parallel universe, come to one of the two identical universes, who's inhabitants call ...

Amazing! I wish I could write poetry that well. I'm generally only good with science fiction. That includes reviews on the list of things I'm not good at writing. Well, ...

Hehehe I bet the kids were singing this while raking the leaves up. :) I thoroughly enjoyed that. Good day! -IKnowAll

Luck

I have other ones but I really only care about this one right now haha: (chapter one) (chapter two) That's all I've got so far... Thanks in advance! -IKnowAll

Wow. Creepy! 0o Good. Maybe should be in horror? I don't know, I'm bad with reviews... Have a good day! -IKnowAll