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Re: Bring on the stories, I'm ready!
Hi I was wondering if you could review my Prologue from my novel. Thanks if you do :)
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Re: Journey To A New World
Hello there Youngwriter, I liked this piece of work a lot. It was interesting and unique which I like. I found only small grammar errors that your reviewers before already ...
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Re: Invisibles. Prologue (Revised)
Hi, thatboy. Thank you for reviewing my work. Thank you , I haven't been working on it for that long so it's great to hear all this feed back early ...
Oct 5, 2010 -
Re: Reviewer Testimonials
Alzora gave me a great review. She picked out all the bad things and gives you suggestions/pointers. She was very helpful. She read all my novels posted chapters and reviewed ...
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Re: How Rain was Created
For english, I had to create a myth about nature. The example was how to camel got it's hump. I chose to do mine on rain when allmixedup and jubber ...
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Re: Yellow Light, White Page
Weird, this is my FIRST post. In the annoying yellow light of my tiny room, I stared at the white paper spreading do you mean spread before me? before me. ...
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Re: Invisibles ~ Chapter 3 - 5
Thank you Alzora. This has helped me a lot. This was fast posting because my mom was getting mad at me because it was getting late and I need to ...
Oct 5, 2010 -
Re: Invisibles ~ Chapters 1 -2
Thank you Alzora, I will fix those mistakes soon. I haven't read the Maximum Ride series. I try to not make my writing like other books so I will see ...
Oct 5, 2010 -
Re: Invisibles. Prologue (Revised)
Thank you Alzora, I will definitely fix those mistakes. I tried to the people's thoughts in italics but it would not work at the time. I will go fix that ...
Oct 5, 2010 -
Re: Invisibles ~ Chapter 3 - 5
Chapters 3, 4 and 5 for my novel Invisibles. Reviews please :D . Chapter 3: Blood is Thicker Than Water When I got to the house I parked the cart ...
Oct 5, 2010 -
Re: Invisibles ~ Chapters 1 -2
Chapters 1 and 2 for Invisibles. Review Please :D Chapter 1: The Beginning My name is Idda Jones and I am a cop. I am fifteen and have a gift ...
Oct 5, 2010 -
Re: Invisibles. Prologue (Revised)
Thank you WickedWonder, that's cool about our names. I tried to get all the grammar mistakes and took out the other chapters and lengthened this one. I tried to add ...
Oct 4, 2010 -
Re: Novels & Novellas (updated)
[quote="Nate"] Fixed Novel Edit Bug From now on, no one should have any trouble getting past step one. quote] Thank godness. When you are new to this like me, this ...
Oct 4, 2010 -
Re: New kid :D
Hello Rhani, I love your name. I'm new here too. Just signed up last night :) . You live in Australia? That's so cool. I live in Canada and it ...
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Re: Light and Darkness
It start ed at the beginning of time. There was a white bull, so full of hatred and rage . His name was Darkness, but we know him as Evil. ...
Oct 4, 2010