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Next installments to my novel Invisibles. I hope you like it.Reviews please :) Chapter 6: Complications I fell limp in Star’s arms, he struggled to hold my weight up as ...

Thank you pointe , I will make sure to change those things. :) . Thank you so much for reviewing my work and thank you for giving me those tips ...

Thank you Bibi. I agree that some parts do need to be fixed but I appreciate you reviewing me story. Thank you soo much for your opinion on my story ...

Hahah thanks so much Kaka. Yes it is my first short story romance and I'm pretty proud of it. Thank you so much and nah, :P . Thank you for ...

Thank you Ktg17 , thank you for reviewing me story. I will definitely fix those mistakes and it's okay that you didn't like the beginning, everyone has a different opionon ...

Thank you Addawen, I will look forward to reading your other rewviews :) . Idda is Tessa , yes , that will become clearer through out the rest of the ...

Thank you everyone, it was my first short story and just wanted to see what you guys would think. I will definitely change those mistakes and add those suggestions. It ...

But have you ever looked at those stars and wondered which one your parents were in the process of destroying at that very moment? I did not understand this sentence. ...

I liked this story excpet there wasn't much to connect to. I liked how the vampire dies at the end :) . I was happy she got her revenge. Everyone ...

Title: Invisibles Genre: Fantasy Novel

I really liked this piece. I was easy to relate to so it made the connection deeper. It made me want to keep reading and it was easy to understand. ...

This piece of work is short but good. The first sentence drew me in wanting to read more. I only found one grammar issue but imagine already pointed it out. ...

Based on a true story about me. It's my first short story so hopefully you like it. His name has been changed and I tried to fix the story up ...

Thank you. It's a school assignment for English and was just wondering what people thought about it. Thank you and that's ok. Ok :) Wicked

I liked this piece a lot. I found a few minor grammar mistakes and they are easy to find. I liked Jamey's character personally, he just has a vunrebility to ...