IHI

Welcome to the site!You'll love it here! :wink:

The poem had a great deal of emotion which was great.But here is some constructive criticism you might want to explain more of whats was good but I know you ...

That poem was amazing!The intensity was great and it was the perfect blend of compassion, friendship,and sorrow.I believe it was amazing.Good job!

Love is new.Love is hidden until it grabs you by surprise and takes you whole for a joyous ride. Love can give you joy and also can keep you company,and ...

Your poem is vary realistic and well thought out.Pluse I thought the poem flowed well too.Nice job once agin.

The poem is vary flowing.I thought the poem was vary true and composed neatly.I also loved it and it was vary moving.Good job!

The poem is a vary good read.But you might not want to post poetry that maybe a littel close to home.

Your poetry was vary thought out and expressive.But you need to make it flow better and make sure you put more feeling into the emotion you are expressing in your ...

Your poetry was vary moving and expressive.I think you did wonderful and I would love to hear more from you.

It fills my deep and rotting soul which has no heart. The majesty of it is overpowering.The beauty is great but deadly. It shows power and grace but no underminds ...