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Re: If I Love Him
Nice job! Keep writing.
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: Welcome New Members! [2]
Hi, welcome to YWS!!!!!!!!!!! :D
Jun 25, 2011 -
Re: deleted
That was a really good piece of work! Keep writing!
Jun 25, 2011 -
Re: Lost (on the road of life)
That was amazing! Keep writing!
Jun 25, 2011 -
Re: Aftermath
This poem has given me inspiration. Thank you for that.
Jun 25, 2011 -
Re: Broken mistake
That was a vary flowing and graceful piece of work. Nice work!
Jun 25, 2011 -
Re: Letting Go (Goodbye)
Your work is amazing! I loved it. I will be watching for some of your work in the future.
Jun 25, 2011 -
Re: deleted
That was a vary inspirational poem. I loved it keep on writeing!
Jun 24, 2011 -
Re: I Have Everything But Love
I feel alone, but I am in a crowd. I am touched and kissed but not loved. I am powerful, but feared. I have money, grace, beauty, respect, land and ...
Jun 17, 2011 -
Re: Write
That was an amazing poem. And well written. Keep writeing!
Jun 17, 2011 -
Re: Nothing
That was vary deep and touching. I loved it keep writeing!
Jun 17, 2011 -
Re: My First True Love
I liked how you kept us guessing and thinking that it was like your wife! But it got me thinking when you talked about you walking to her for the ...
Jun 17, 2011 -
Re: Another
Your poem was vary flowing and had just the right zing to it. Nice job.
Jun 17, 2011 -
Re: Take away the pain
Your poem is descriptive which is something I liked. I loved how you explained how it feels to have peering eyes watching you and how it makes a person feel. ...
Jun 17, 2011 -
Re: In The Night
Your poem was beautifully written. It flowed with nice a rhythm and was easy to read. I loved how you compared the objects and sights. Nice job.
Jun 17, 2011