Hypocrit

You're getting somewhere with the edit, maybe. I mean, do you feel like you're learning? Cause you're generally the best judge of that, gotta hand it to you. There is ...

Oh yeah, whoops, must have accidentally left numlock on, then stretched my pinky down a row, then turned it off. bad.

...Enthusiastic hangman in my bed, Judas, the kiss. SEX! It's about sex. That part. Vinelike incisions chase the bones to the floor. Gutted. Bathes of grapejuice. Gutted. We gut everything. ...

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Sah-weet. I REALLY hope this was written on the kids deathbed. Thank god for alcohol, it kills people like this.

Could you please be a little more specific as to where or how I failed at connected metaphor, imagery, or the general theme? I consider aesthetics to be whether or ...

Pwetty pwease?

Sorry I really don't see much need for punctuation in a poem. I write it like I would read it. Besides Lady Liberty and Red Scare what else needs capitalization? ...

Gahh why can't people pick the same username?? I know its Eds but still.