Hypocrit

Sah-weet. I REALLY hope this was written on the kids deathbed. Thank god for alcohol, it kills people like this.

her skin spins (over) itself like webs, or covers, oceans of satin and dew, streaks a cross ___________(over) miles of windowpane reflecting surface like suffrage ...with a molotov and parade ...

It's how prebuscent self-deceiving emotionally unstable white middle class suburban girls get their rocks off without suicide girls, or before they're old enough to know. It's also marked by the ...

Could you please be a little more specific as to where or how I failed at connected metaphor, imagery, or the general theme? I consider aesthetics to be whether or ...

Pwetty pwease?

Probably were NOT attempting to make this serious, which is really too bad. Why do anything at all if you're not going to throw your all into it? You reuse ...

(Note: PLEASE READ. Have noticed, on this site, that certain members continue to perpetuated a dogmatic institution and impression upon poetry without knowledge of WHY, thus it's dogmatism. Do NOT ...

frail fuck, she's noxious and intoxicating a lip biting introvert chewing conversation like mental masturbation slowly, the image has to set I'm throwing up blood in regret an etymologist and ...

Sorry I really don't see much need for punctuation in a poem. I write it like I would read it. Besides Lady Liberty and Red Scare what else needs capitalization? ...

Wow. I thought he was hard on me... Ok now I wouldn't say that. Yes there is alotta fluff but you have an idea and an image thats one thing. ...

The fact that one his first day on TW the super-mod became f**king carnard, I doubt he'll behave here...I doubt he's ever behaved :roll: One my first day? L2rite fin ...

OMG! Its Thom Yorke! And no.

You sure are nice stabs! And yes I currently don't have internet access and won't for some time, possibly forever. So I am on fairly infrequently but am going to ...

I really like the shortness of it. However, in a short poem you need to make sure each line is killer. Or maybe thats just my opinion. Now I think ...

Gahh why can't people pick the same username?? I know its Eds but still.