Hypocrit

I'll start this off. - - There is a dullness in experience. - Perhaps it's in the way the phone sits and stares accusingly at your mouth. - Perhaps it's ...

So, back where I come from this is all the rage. Here's how this goes, write a poem right now... no, right now! Why? Because art is it's own reward. ...

Hypocrit walks into a moonlit tavern. Hypocrit wonders the origin of the narration of his movements. Hypocrit examines the narrator's examination of his thoughts as he himself examines the narrator ...

You capture a melancholy rant through time jsut perfectly. Each and every time you switch scenes you end on a character defining moment. This portrait is really amazingly well done. ...

...Awesome.

You're getting somewhere with the edit, maybe. I mean, do you feel like you're learning? Cause you're generally the best judge of that, gotta hand it to you. There is ...

For reading or writing? I don't write to have someone read me and go "wow, that was a polsihed professional piece". Why would I? I write to improve. If I ...

Jah, so, what galerius said. No, if you want to be pretentious, and do lines like "to where?" I'll tell you how. Here's how... tie them back to previous metaphors, ...

Oh yeah, whoops, must have accidentally left numlock on, then stretched my pinky down a row, then turned it off. bad.

Lovely! Best poem i've read in the past half hour! K. So, we've got your cahracter, grief, pain, etc... manic with the dilirium this mysterious figure left her. I think ...

Well... I warned you... here goes... Ok, first off, the entire theme is limiting and hardly explored. Spider-man, and love, and yes. What about universal archetypes of the hero, or ...

Take out the punctuation and spacing. Read it. It's a boring narrative. That's it. That's all there is. There's a little lesson at the end. I don't know what to ...

This is terrible. You have an idea. Now, instead of showing us that idea in the most blatant form possible, try hinting at it using other things... you know... metaphors? ...

(Lulz. Had some fun with the title.) I went to the market. A man asked me for change and I knew I was moving. He asked me for a letter ...

Been watching the media spin. Betting we go in and intervene. Betting Obama uses same justification as Bush senior, only it goes over smooth cause he's centrist and black. Other ...