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That was so sad :( , yet so good! :D The only advice I have is that you should start a new paragraph after each character speaks. Also, detail will ...

:smt005 That was pretty funny! However, it was hard to follow the rhythm. You have a nice imagination though!

I loved the idea of the story. It was very sad, yet sweet. However, I want to see a bit more of Margaret's transition from being cold to the narrator ...

This was great! I believe this can work as a fast song or short song, whichever floats your boat. I already have it stuck in my head. :)

Thanks, peoples :smt003 ! I really appreciate your advice.

The Falline Story- Book One: It's about the lives of four deputies of Falline, how a rebellious deputy of Falline is changed to a good man by the woman he ...

When you narrorate what you do everyday in your head, when you create characters as you daydream, you set up scenerios in your mind and think of how your new ...

Thanks, Crescent! Your my first review of my work. At first I was not quite sure how to even write lyrics :lol:

I never tried lyrics before and I thought it would be fun to try. :D Enjoy: 1) I saw them at the county fair, She had blue ribbons in her ...

This was a really touching story. So sad. There is one thing I would change. I would make the narrorator a bit older. You said she was eleven, however I ...

What a cute story! I was dissapointed at the end, but that was ententional. :D I liked how you made the letter an actual character. I will never think of ...

Hey, I loved how you started this story and how it ended. The use of symbolism was magnifisent! The rose fit perfectly with the story's meaning. I admire writers that ...

Hey, I'm new here, too. So far all I have been doing is reviews... I've been kinda nervous about posting any of my work online. :? I hope that every ...

Welcome to Young Writers! I just joined today and I am still getting in the swing of things. The way you wrote this story really but me in the senerio ...

I really enjoyed reading your story. However, it did seem to stop abruptly as if the ending was missing. Also, whenever I think of the title "Silly's Little Love Story" ...