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Re: Movie Script Feedback please!
This had great moral value and It really caught my attention! I do agree with Ecrivain, you do need to revise how your script is set up and emphasize the ...
Apr 27, 2010 -
Re: Second Chances
I liked how your character learned something from this experience. It was believable, too. I would have liked to have seen what exactly happened between them that made her break ...
Apr 27, 2010 -
Re: Overly Protective of my Novel
Thanks for the advice. I don't really care that people think about it. I'm only concerned about what would happen to it if I lose it. You're right, Kibble. I ...
Apr 27, 2010 -
Re: Desperadoes of the Highway
Thanks for the replies! :D I set it for a southern rock, but I wasn't too sure myself. My friend said it was something the Eagles would have done.
Apr 27, 2010 -
Re: Looking For A Partner
Alright, this might be fun, so I'll give it a try. Does anyone want to try a Western Romance? I know westerns aren't the most popular on this site, but ...
Apr 27, 2010 -
Re: Overly Protective of my Novel
Okay, I have to bring this right out and say it. I'm overly protective of my novel. I am able to post short stories, lyrics, and other writing works online ...
Apr 27, 2010 -
Re: When writing, what is your most difficult challenge?
Finishing it. Ug, once I start a story, I rarley finish it. Also, trying to get myself to present it to others. Yeah, :oops: I'm shy like that.
Apr 27, 2010 -
Re: The Street Preformer
I really liked how your story painted a descriptive picture in my head as I could clearly see what was really going on. The other repliers pretty much summed up ...
Apr 27, 2010 -
Re: Desperadoes of the Highway
Here's another one! I hope you enjoy this one, too. Tell me how you think or if it is too short. :D Gale's the Queen of the Hearts, just wont ...
Apr 26, 2010 -
Re: Coffee Break (a Poker Face by Lady Gaga parody)
This has to be my favorite parody so far! Definitely a like for this one! :lol: :lol:
Apr 26, 2010 -
Re: Duet: Just One Dance Please?
Thank you sooo much zebraskittles! :lol: I'm not used to doing lyrics but I'm learning.
Apr 25, 2010 -
Re: Duet: Just One Dance Please?
I thought this would be a fun song. I thought about Johnny Cash and June Carter singing it. It may be awful but I think it's fun! :elephant: Duet: Just ...
Apr 25, 2010 -
Re: Good Enough
This song is very unrestricted to what kinds of music you can make it into. I can see it being a successful country or pop song.
Apr 25, 2010 -
Re: Don't Let Go - a song dedicated to my Haitian orphans
This was very sweet of you to make this song to all the orphans in Haiti. It was a beautiful song. I expect great lyrics from you! :smt002
Apr 25, 2010 -
Re: The Twins.
The first paragraph was sort of what my mornings go. It made me laugh! There are some things that you need to fix. Before each quotation add a period or ...
Apr 25, 2010
