Hydey

Wow this was really cool! It had a good sound to it I think and I could not find anything worth complaining about it. This was great! :D

Hello I'm Hydey. I liked the word choice in this. When reading your lyrics, it seemed as if it was more of a poem than a song. For a poem, ...

Hello, I'm Hydey. Welcome to YWS, Shizunarui!!! :elephant: Your story was very entertaining to read. However, I believe it sort of rushed through the scenes. You need to describe more ...

Hello I'm Hydey. This was pretty funny! :lol: Very random and kinda weird, but funny.

Thanks peoples! I tried to make it about a girl tired of her boyfriend not paying as much attention to her as he does his music career, but I can ...

Thankyou Thane! :smt003

Hello, I'm Hydey. *Like* for me! :D This was so cute. I loved how innocent and sweet the kiss was and how you described how the narrator was thinking about ...

Hello, I'm Hydey. Let's take a look at your lyrics, shall we? First of all, this was beutiful! The feeling, the emotion, and the flow is what holds a good ...

I liked how it flowed. I agree with Snoik, it was sort of odd. At first, it seemed as if the narrator was actually talking to a butterfly, but then ...

Hi Scarlette! :) This story was quite amusing, especially when PMS was mentioned! :lol: I have some friends that can relate to that in their relationships. I believe a little ...

This one is kinda silly and fun. This was the first song my friend's band used at their performance. It about made me faint! But I heard people singing it ...

What a beautiful story! :D :D I loved the scene where she is on the pier with her hair blowing in the wind. It just grabbed me. There was so ...

I agree. Thank's everyone!

I cannot remember the name of the book, but it was set up as if we were reading a play script. I hated it. There was too much dialogue and ...

Okay, so this one is not my favorite but I wanted to see how other people thought of it. I tried putting it in a fast past, then compared it ...