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Re: Broken Promises
The brick wall that had been forming between me and Mike ever since I came back wasn't a wall after all.. I would change the "me and Mike" to "Mike ...
Jan 1, 2011 -
Re: Worst Book You've Ever Read
Invisible Man. Yeah, it suggested moral value and our literature class thinks it was geared towards the civil rights movement. I thought it was hard to get into. Our advance ...
Oct 13, 2010 -
Re: Books you loved more than the movie...
Lonesome Dove. This is the best book ever. :D The movie was pretty impressive how it followed the story exactly. The reason why I loved the book more was because ...
Oct 13, 2010 -
Re: Caller ID
I really liked your word usage of this short story. I can see this as being more of a beginning to a story or even a epilogue. It explained the ...
Oct 10, 2010 -
Re: I have a question...
Thanks a bunch everyone. I was just curious. That helps a bunch. :)
Oct 10, 2010 -
Re: Boom-De-Ah-Da
That was really clever! I believed it had just the right amount of rhyme. You don't want to over complicate it. Great job and write like the wind!
Oct 10, 2010 -
Re: I have a question...
Hey guys I have a quick question about posting things on Lyrics. Would a Ballad belong in this section? Is it considered a lyric? If not where would I post ...
Aug 26, 2010 -
Re: The Parking Lot
I wrote this when I was about thirteen years old and I had just recently found it in a desk drawer all crumbled up. I'm not so satisfied with the ...
May 19, 2010 -
Re: Moment
Hello, I'm Hydey. I wish I could have heard what this song sounds like. Also, I agree with the others, you need a different title. To me, choosing the right ...
May 18, 2010 -
Re: Demon of Many Names (rated for drug use)
A friend told me that I should try writing something dark and sad. So, I wrote this about an addict. It's a different taste than what I am used to, ...
May 10, 2010 -
Re: John Steinbeck's "Of Mice & Men"
This was actually the first book by John Steinbeck that I have read. It was great and the movie didn't ruin it. The T-V show BANANZA copied "Of Mice and ...
May 10, 2010 -
Re: Books you loved more than the movie...
Lonesome Dove! My absolute favorite novel ever. Believe it or not, I read the entire series before taking to the television screen, award winning or not. I believe Robert Duvall ...
May 10, 2010 -
Re: An Ordeal of the Titanic
Hello, I'm Hydey. I love stories about the Titanic and I believe this was an excellent description of the horror of what happened on the ship. Here's just some nit-picking ...
May 10, 2010 -
Re: No Man's Land
Reading this story, I felt as if I as there. Your description was excellent! My dear boy, I hope you will never have to experience the truth of war in ...
May 10, 2010 -
Re: I love cake
When I first read this I thought, aw, this will be a cute little song... and then it grew kinda scary. It was like a gremlin that is all cute ...
May 5, 2010
