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Re: Any ideas?
What does she like? Is she a fan of the Harry Potter series? Get her the complete hardcover set, it'll blow her brains out. Is she a fan of some ...
Dec 4, 2014 -
Re: Soul Mate
Easy to understand. I like this poem. However, it needs to be touched up a little. Preferably more suitable punctuation marks as well as a stronger inversion of words. Overall, ...
Nov 19, 2007 -
Re: i need a title for this
Nice piece. A few careless spelling and grammar mistakes here and there though. This part of the story is kinda cliche. Karlie moved to one side of the bed and ...
Nov 18, 2007 -
Re: Story Deleted
Lovely! This is by-far the first romance-related article that does not sound cheesy nor immature that I've ever read! Though, I don't really get the "Nice how we can just ...
Nov 18, 2007 -
Re: Death of a Fairy
I'm no master but I think that this narrative poem would be a little lot better if everything rhymed. The introduction's nice but the climax towards the ending was well, ...
Nov 18, 2007
