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  • Other » Other, General Re: Any ideas?

    What does she like? Is she a fan of the Harry Potter series? Get her the complete hardcover set, it'll blow her brains out. Is she a fan of some ...

    Dec 4, 2014
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Soul Mate

    Easy to understand. I like this poem. However, it needs to be touched up a little. Preferably more suitable punctuation marks as well as a stronger inversion of words. Overall, ...

    Nov 19, 2007
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: i need a title for this

    Nice piece. A few careless spelling and grammar mistakes here and there though. This part of the story is kinda cliche. Karlie moved to one side of the bed and ...

    Nov 18, 2007
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Story Deleted

    Lovely! This is by-far the first romance-related article that does not sound cheesy nor immature that I've ever read! Though, I don't really get the "Nice how we can just ...

    Nov 18, 2007
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Death of a Fairy

    I'm no master but I think that this narrative poem would be a little lot better if everything rhymed. The introduction's nice but the climax towards the ending was well, ...

    Nov 18, 2007


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