HybridHead

It's a good attempt but I don't exactly get the idea of this photo. I think that it'd be better if your niece looked away and if she did not ...

LOVELY. The mothers' ear's a little off though. Took me a while to realize that she's wearing ear rings. And loose the bangle. Make her arms less masculine. A feminine ...

Easy to understand. I like this poem. However, it needs to be touched up a little. Preferably more suitable punctuation marks as well as a stronger inversion of words. Overall, ...

"The clock’s face is blank now I’m without you" I don't get that part. Awesome, awesome poem, though. :D

=.=" Stick to writing, would ya? :wink: No, seriously.

Nice piece. A few careless spelling and grammar mistakes here and there though. This part of the story is kinda cliche. Karlie moved to one side of the bed and ...

Lovely! This is by-far the first romance-related article that does not sound cheesy nor immature that I've ever read! Though, I don't really get the "Nice how we can just ...

I'm no master but I think that this narrative poem would be a little lot better if everything rhymed. The introduction's nice but the climax towards the ending was well, ...