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Re: "Glee" fanfic - "Material Girl"
Personally, I watch a lot of TV and Glee is pretty much my arch-nemesis. I can't say I find it very entertaining, and I'm amazed that it's staying on the ...
Jan 6, 2010 -
Re: The Pillars of Creation
Eyes pried open to take in the golden edges and deep shadows, Of a mirage where everything is perfect. I don't think you should have the comma after shadows in ...
Jan 6, 2010 -
Re: do you feel it
That is one scary piece. Of course mean that in every good way possible. I really got hooked in while reading it, which is a pretty tough thing to pull ...
Jan 5, 2010 -
Re: Breathe
Being busy, Nature is. Great piece, and that one line stands out too me. I'm sorry that you want the piece ripped to shreds, but I love it too much. ...
Jan 5, 2010 -
Re: Frigid Death
The only thing I find that's troubling in this piece is the lack of punctuation. Sure, you don't need a lot of punctuation rules in poetry, but if each sentence ...
Jan 5, 2010