Howler

I try to cope, but I can only feign I dream of when I will see him again The word feign isn't really good for this, it's another case I ...

It would seem I have a knack for lingering on broken things: I’ll say, this armor has many dings. These lines don't really seem to right. The first two lines ...

I honestly love this piece. I love this sort of death-child thing you have going, and the fact that you use the word something so much makes it seem very ...

I still remember, I remember when the universe began. All sound and colours whirling twirling loving aching And then... nothing. I can't say much bad about this piece that I ...

I can't deny that I've been there. The subject of the bully is a very intrueging one for poetry, because to any victim, they seem larger than they really are. ...

The sun sinks into the horizon, leaving a splash of colors smeared against the sky. Those 2 lines are definetely my favorite. Sunsets are one of those really powerful images ...

This is a good piece, and the title/first line is very nice and attention grabbing. But the biggest thing I love in this is the AAAABBBB(etc.) rhyme scheme. It's a ...

Yeah, I've gotta agree with Icubed. It's definetely a clutered piece with a lot of questions. The piece is about doubt; answer to your own questions with what you want ...

The only thing that bugs me is that the last stanza is an extra line long, breaking the pattern. It does seem like only an extra line was needed for ...

I love the beginning. Makes me think of a song called "No Rain" by Blind Melon. It's always cool to see something sad like rain turned into something that's a ...

Lots of nice imagery. It's easy to tell the poem focuses on it, and it leads well into the cute ending you put in. The "Wilted Bouquet of Dandylions Given ...

I can't remember the name of this kind of poem that you've done here Unless I'm mistaken, it's called an acrostic, and it's very uncommon, but cases like this do ...

Yes, my beloved piece of cake is completely amazing! The user below me is going through a personal crisis.

I get that fear on any vacation. I love writing enough that I write when I shouldn't (say, in the middle of a test), but if I'm stuck in a ...

is this a song you wrote? Should've mentioned this before. Yes, it does have a mostly constant rhyme and rhythm, but this isn't meant to be a song. I have ...