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Due to the cruel world, I'm removing this. I will respond to the below comment however so I don't look like an idiot myself. I don't recall saying the idea ...

Ello there... Sorry to say but it was hard to keep reading... Not because the poem itself was bad, but because the grammar was not good... I read some of ...

Pleased to be acquainted Kat! Though short poems are kind of hard to go into a lot of detail on I will try by best! (and don't think short poems ...

Alright, first let me say this thread is awesome! and niteowl has my favorites that I've seen (read the first two pages haha) Now for mine. Everyone hold up... I ...

Ok, your thing looks fun :) so yeah... I'm coming here. And for your efforts, here is a sexy fish for your enjoyment.... :) (I don't think he is actually ...

Hello loudnonsense! OK, just a general impression tonight. I really liked it for the most part. I think it could have been a little longer, but short is good, I ...

Hi there KTG! I would like to have the honor of being your first reviewie. :) Here is the URL if you would be ever so kind. Thanks in advance!

Alright, I left it open to a lot of imagination throughout the whole thing because I was really having a hard time trying to keep under 500 words... :) So ...

Alright, just a short story I wrote, I don't know how good it is, my friend just gave me the topic of "A lawyer folding clothes in Chicago." So I ...

Howdy! Just one little edit I saw. w h ere the waves crashed smoothly Otherwise I really liked it, the first four lines or so especially! :) One thing I ...

I'm just gonna give a short general impression. When I saw the title I thought "Sounds like the song I'm listening to right now.... Love the way you lie by ...

Welcome to YWS! Alright, firstly my first impression. I loved how it started, but it moved into, as said above, a piece that seemed rather forced. As if you were ...

Okay, this one was inspired by Iron Man 2. When Tony Stark is told to solve the riddle of his heart, I loved that line and just had to write ...

Very short and to the point, that is what I like! I agree with the above, the title is so enticing that it leaves a lot to be desired. Fortunately, ...

Wow, this was one emotional piece of work, I wouldn't be surprised to find you even cried while writing it. I think I just might. It was really a great ...