HostofHorus

Howdy! Could you review this poem for me? I would be very honored to have a critique by Mr. Pointe, I have seen your work, and it has been impressive. ...

I'm back! :) Told you I like your work! Can you review my new poem? It is kind of coupled with the last one. Thanks in advance!

The Thoughts Inside My Heart Not long ago I shared with you, The voices that I said I knew, But for myself, for my conscience sake, I must admit, it ...

Hi SilentRain! Let me start by saying I read most all of your poems, and I really like your work. That is why I went seeking for your thread here ...

So, I this was an idea I stored in my "Stuff I Should Use" folder, and came across today. I decided I'd run with it, and this is what I ...

This was co written by me and a friend, it is one of the things we do... Anyways it was for an English assignment on Mr. Chaucer's Canterbury Tales. We ...

Wow Snoink haha It was great =P

Yupp I just saw that haha :) Thanks Snoink! And also thanks for the review, and the edits. Already fixing them!

I'll give a quick response. I liked it a lot. And the last two lines.... Wow, powerful and just overall amazing. And they are the only thing I'm going to ...

K my computer is really slow and bad... it posted the thing twice on accident. How do I get someone to delete one of them? Or how do I delete ...

Sappy? Maybe, probably... But it is my promise, and the article I live by, even if it is simple. But, is it? Comments are much appreciated. Forever and Always Forever ...

Thank you so much!!!!

Alright, I have a bunch (like 25) of these problems concerning Avogadro's number, and I was gone when they went over them... So I thought I'd post like two, and ...

It made me laugh, even just the title :) I agree with everything the first person had to say. Seeing YWS kinda threw me off for some reason, was debating ...

Mmmm... I liked the rhythm for the most part, you drifted away from the nice you had in the beginning towards the end. And as it has been stated above, ...