HostofHorus

So I wrote this up and am planning to deliver it for valentines. As such, I would really appreciate any advice and input you guys have! I'm not real set ...

Hmmm, thanks so far everyone! I'll tell you though, I absolutely hated Eragon.... I don't know, it seemed way too boring, especially to read that much for one little battle ...

If I had wings I'd fly away from here with all I hold dear deep in my heart. Alright, good starting, makes your reader wonder why you would fly away ...

Hi there! Since you've gotten so many reviews already, I'll just give a general impression and tell you I loved it. It was cute, and sad, and wonderful, and cliche ...

Thanks :) Yeah, I've read the Harry Potter books, I just don't love them all that much, I think the movies kind of ruined them for me. They are good, ...

I'm reading this right now, and like all of his books, it is great. Fast paced, fun, just overall amazing! I am kind of disappointed with whoever his editor was ...

Hello fellow YWS'ers ( :smt001 ) I am in the need for some new books, and I'm really open to anything. I'm 15, but like I said, I don't care ...

A story of truth, and though it might be disappointing to some, it is what it is, and I can't change reality, as you will see, I have tried.  Universe ...

Hello! J.R.S. Here and happy to review your works. The below is a list of the items I am willing to review. Poetry: I will review any poetry under 15 ...

I received a wonderful review from Skins! Thanks Skins!

Ello there Pointe! Here to return the favor of a review, and get another star!!! :D Alrighty so here we go.... The lights twinkle through the window, welcoming me in. ...

Well, TheWalkinDude took the nit pick review away from me... :) So I'll just give some impressions. First, I liked it, there were parts where I was a little confused, ...

Hmmm... Well Howdy! The human Host of Horus here to review! I'd go with the second one, but only because I like the way it finishes up. The first finishes ...

Hi there Skins! I would be quite thankful if you would review my work with your pretty badges and all. :) You can do a mix of nit pick and ...

The Feeling of Christmas (Partially as a request for a holiday story, and partially as a contest entry, I have written "The Feeling of Christmas." The story was to include ...