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:smt006 Hi Berry! So how's it going? What kind of things do you like to write and read?

Telling instead of showing is one of the most common things I see wrong in stories. But what does showing and telling mean? Telling - Should not be used in ...

It growled. What growled? Colours swirled and time echoed in upon itself. Suddenly an unfathomable void cut into my imaginings like some stepping onto thin ice. This line confuses me. ...

Whoa, I never realized this. Thanks for posting. I'm glad I've only posted the first two or so chapters of my 'novels'. This is okay, right? As far as I ...

I'm not sure if this is the right spot for this, but I felt it needs to be said. There are problems with posting work online and then attempting to ...

That certainly wasn't true- they all worked in predictable ways. You have some sort of hyphen obsession. :) This should either be a ; or : There was a sound, ...

“Willow?” I heard the door to the dojo slide shut. Door to the what? Is this slang I've never heard of? :shock: How is she really? Why does she have ...

^ So, I might be a little biased because I'm (ahem) a moderator on this site, but I think it's a great resource for young writers. All of the authors ...

Happens to me all the time. When I get a new idea, I write it down on this little Excel worksheet I have to keep all my ideas in. Then ...

This is Claudia's score: Score Breakdown I Love Her, I Let Her Go 8 She's The Anti-Cool 1 I'm Destined For What? 3 Can't Complain 6 Momma HATES Her! 1 ...

As the last ray of the sun vanished behind the tower’s peak a sudden rage seemed to fill the crowd. This is a good hook. But put a comma after ...

Your parents are constantly urging to to develop some other hobby than what they call, "sitting typing away on that darnded laptop all day long." Yes! I live in constant ...

haha, all that is so true. You know you're a writer when life is one big storybook and you constantly narrate it in your head. I did that for YEARS, ...

I live in northeast US and I've never heard that before in my life. :)

I read it because I always like to read books before watching the movie. Personally I felt it dragged on a bit and it wasn't all that unexpected, but other ...