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Re: Mike
I noticd you said "from sundown to sun up" you might want to switch the sun words, it'll make more sense. Other than that, I cried like a baby. Wonderfully ...
Apr 5, 2011 -
Re: Stigma Of Love
This was very dramatic, and had a good plot but it wasn't very well written. I saw a lot of grammar problems. And the sentance wording made it feel like ...
Apr 5, 2011 -
Re: Why?
No, this is not from a personal experience. My cousin had her boyfriend cheat on her, and that's what inspired this. It's not like she got pregnant or anything, she ...
Apr 4, 2011 -
Re: It's called a lie.
Wow, this is a powerful piece of fiction. I loved it every step of the way, however I didn't like the fact that neither of them had names. Other than ...
Apr 1, 2011 -
Re: To Kill A Unicorn [2/2]
You're right, your ending was weak. But it was hysterical, so don't change it. All I have left to say is Awsome!
Mar 31, 2011 -
Re: To Kill A Unicorn [1/2]
Damn. You are the reason people get on these sites. Great job as usual RH! But I didn't need to tell you that.
Mar 31, 2011 -
Re: The Angel Chronicles: The Begining
She chose door two, meaning that she would stay there and keep her angel blood. Eventually yes, she will die but there's time for that at a later date. I'll ...
Mar 30, 2011 -
Re: Lost Keys
This is good. and no, I don't give crital reviews unless the piece is really bad andin need of work, so when I say somethings good I mean it. So ...
Mar 29, 2011