HorsebackWriter

Parasite: The Corruptive Shadow Chapter 1: Unexpected …! Who had thought that this would happen to someone like me? Who’d thought that a knife would be pointed right at my ...

She chose door two, meaning that she would stay there and keep her angel blood. Eventually yes, she will die but there's time for that at a later date. I'll ...

The simplicity of it is nice, but at the same time weird. What I mean is, the fact that is simple and short is good, but the good point make ...

This is good. and no, I don't give crital reviews unless the piece is really bad andin need of work, so when I say somethings good I mean it. So ...

Another fist flying, another bruise guess what, he's drunk again. It hurts worse when he knows what he's doing but even more when he doesn't stop. he was at the ...

[quote="Ranger Hawk"]Well here's the next chapter! Sorry it's a little long; I normally don't post such long sections but I can't break it off in any other spots. As a ...

You were gifted at birth. I'm serios, this rocks. The dialouge kept me laughing through the entire read, and it was well structured. First one here! :D MUHAHAHAHA!! Yeah.. I ...

Day-um. Okay, you are now my favorite author on here (No offense to you others reading this!) Seriously, I've read a lot of books on the dragon subject (I'm into ...

Chapter 1 “Now,” said the man COMMA “the boss wants to see you, AND you must do everything he tells you or you’ll be gravely punished. You understand?” I answered ...

Chapter One: The End The fog had lifted by the time I reached the corner. The night air was cool and crisp and a soft breeze ruffled my loose hair ...

That was good for a preface/prolouge. I like the way you seemed to capture what everyone feels, Because I think everyone feels that way about death. We spend a lifetime ...

Wow, all I can say is, wow. For a prolouge, I think that it was good. The last line suprised me and left me wanting more. Your way of writing ...

First off: I'm a person who cares! Second off: Love your bio! Third off: Join the club, I'm easy to win over to.

:D Hi yall! I'm one of those kinds of writers whose hooked and can't stop. I'm homeschooled so I have more time to work than others, and I live in ...

Preface “Open the door! Christian, Bobbi, Erica, Mandy, Scarlet! Wake up!” I sat up in the and switched on the bedside lamp. “Did you guys hear something?” Erica mumbled from ...