HorsebackWriter

Dark and Grey Shackled and Chained. Gaurds Protect Guards is spelled G-U-A-R-D-S. The only thing left Left of me. You break your pattern here, maybe you should stick the 'of ...

I liked this, I fell it captured the feelings of those who were in those wars or those who can remember them. However, it's very raw, you may want to ...

Tired of long-sleeves in the summer; [b]and feeling nothing, but alone. Hoping that each day will get shorter, as they fade away. Wave good-bye to the dreadful past - I ...

A kiss. Just a simple kiss. And now he's gone. Okay, you might want to tell us that you'd switching perspectives. As I started reading this I just thought that ...

Wow this is pretty good. I'm really enjoyed reading it.

Prologue He pushed himself off the ground, balancing on little unsteady legs and standing up. He had fallen, tripping over one of the many toys and trinkets strewn across the ...

Looking over this, and reading it, I have to say that overall I liked it, but that there were things that bugged me. I hardly saw any spelling mistakes, or ...

I love this! (no surprise there, I love all your work!) But seriously, this is funny, good. I feel no urge to point out he good, the bad, and the ...

Hiya! I've had writers block for weeks and it was so hard to write this chapter! I think it's ok, but nitpicks are very much appreciated! In fact, tear it ...

This is a concept and first draft for a lengthy piece of fiction. I plan to write about the last 16 days of a young man's life who contracts the ...

A/N: Rated 16+ for later chapters. Chapter Two- Flight or Fight A/N: /if words are in between these two guys they either are Spanish or translate into Spanish/ ::Polish:: **French** ...

Author's Note: I was introduced to the X-Men, and I am obsessed. So now this is my first attempt at fanfiction. Crates are welcome, sorry it's so short!! Preface-Fights and ...

Author's Note: I was introduced to the X-Men, and I am obsessed. So now this is my first attempt at fanfiction. Crates are welcome, sorry it's so short!! Preface-Fights and ...

Yes, I've finished a book, no I don't like anime, I'm into the X-Men (its a pic of shadowcat and colossus!)

First, you need to work on your capitalization skills, just from glancing through this I can tell that they are lacking. Also, there were places were you peft out small ...