HorsebackWriter

My mother had always been supportive of me and they way I chose to live my life, or in the very least I thought she was. As I look back ...

Life is hard. Simple and to the point. I like you. And not in the lesbian way. That's the simple way to put It. Ooooh, more simplicity. But maybe you ...

Grammar and spelling wise, I see nothing wrong. I loved the topic you chose, and you wrote it very clearly, very well. I just have one pet peeve that I ...

thanks NightWriter! I'm mostly freanch but my ancestry is really wacked so I've made it my goal to learn all of the languages my extended family speaks. Since most of ...

Thanks so much. And thank your brother for me as well, please.

Your spelling is good, and I love your topic, but there's just one thing that bugs me. I have two friends whom you should know who are feeling very neglected ...

Never mind the spoiler, here's the English version: Love What is love? Is it the look a mother gives her child, Or the look a husband gives his wife? Is ...

One of the most difficult translations I've ever done. Message me is you want the English version. By the wya, it's latin and my grammar probaly sucks. Amor Quis est ...

We've all noticed that it doesn't let you indent on here unless you use the space bar, so you're safe from a chewing out from that. In actuality, your grammar ...

I don;t see any grammar mistakes, YYYYYIIIIIPPPPPEEEEEEEEEE!!!!! I hate having to do that. I like your poem, the story it told, the message it conveyed (Guess that's the same thing ...

It was doomed from the start, they said. It would never work out, they said. Who were they to judge us? Who were they to say it was wrong? What ...

The first few paragraphs of your story are good, just a little bit stiff and lacking of information. You never really mention how old the narator is, nor did I ...

Dear Whoever, You kissed me. You kissed me. You kissed me. You kissed me. You kissed me. You kissed me. You kissed me. You kissed me. You kissed me. You ...

What I mostly saw were grammar errors, and even though there were a lot of the they were mostly just that you didn't capitalize something you needed to. Good job!

"So, before we pray, I would like to say that this year's First United Methodist Youth Retreat has been wonderful. It's so amazing that all of you could come. Okay, ...