HopelesslyandIrrevocably

Note : This is just a beginning, tell me what you think, because it is just a really weird idea... ------------------------------- "I is a NINJA! I IS A NINJA" Teo ...

Wow. I think that this is a really sweet poem, but you know what would make this poem a gazillion times better? If you added on. I can tell that ...

Thanks you guys! That really made my day. I will try to write more poetry :D Peace out!

WARNING: I AM NOT A POET!!!! i just couldn't think of any other way to express this, so please give me as much feedback as you can! ----------------- Will we ...

Ok, there is something about the way that you framed everything that just gave me this PERFECT picture of what the girl looked like and the guy she was with. ...

This is very powerful. And it was all throughout the poem, until we hit the VERY last line: "I would rather respected for my mind Than ogled for forged beauty." ...

Hey ray ray! as i said last night, this writing is INCREDIBLE! with a little editing i think that all of the poem's that you showed me could be published ...

Hello! I love this story and i can't wait to see where it goes! You can bet i will be watching for the next chapter, this prologue definetly got me ...

Prologue: Beginning a story has never been my strong point. I have always gotten ahead of myself, to the exciting stuff you know? Ever since I was a little girl ...

Hey heyz! Ok, i am gonna try to be as mean as possible! (I have trouble being serious with reveiws) But I have to say that i have to agree ...

I think that you did lovely in this poem, and it really made me think, but i also think that it would be more effective if you added on. this ...

I had to read this a couple times thorough to understand what you were trying to say, but i think i got it. For a poem so small i think ...

This blew me away! I am completly amazed by this incredible piece of poetry! I love every single part and i don't think there is much of anything that you ...

HEY ROSE! i have this in my journal from when you first wrote it! :D it was a little different then! what do you mean by it? I think instead ...

Aliya. Aliya. Aliya. HOLYCRAPIWORSHIPTHEGROUNDYOUWALKON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 oh. my. freaking. god. I feel like my friend has turned into a celebrity, and even if your not, you should be