HomelessPorcupine

Hello Aspiring Author! I can't really add much to what has already been said, but I will give you my bit of opinion. This paragraph seems like it's the intro ...

I really love stories, short or long, about wars. This, however, was different than most that I have read because it didn't really get the horror of it all across. ...

This is really good! The description is great, and it has good imagery. The only thing that I really saw was this. I ignored the gunshots and the screams around ...

Hey, This is very, very interesting. It has a different, abstract feel to it that makes me want to read more. There were only a couple of things that I ...