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I think mainly with mental illness, we want people to take it seriously already, because it is serious. It's taken quite a while for people to even consider certain mental ...

I honestly can't really work on a novel for that long. My interests shift, my personality shifts, my understandings shift. Generally a few months of working on a project and ...

>:3 I'm not sure where to start. Because I tend to lose interest in my stories fairly early on, my worlds don't often go beyond "oh what a lovely picture." ...

I really like the Deathcomedy idea! C:

Seconding what Kyll said about planning! Something that I think goes hand-in-hand with that is telling people about your story. For me, if I write down too much about my ...

Sometimes bullies don't even know they're being a bully. Two of my bestest friends used to talk me down to build themselves up-- but I really don't think they meant ...

Also there's Flash Fiction which is one of my favourites- because it's fun to write. XP Flash Fiction is basically a really short, short story, and it's generally more of ...

You've got some great replies, but I thought I'd drop my two cents. You really have to find what works for you. So test out the different ways of writing/planning ...

Basically what Rei said: figure out where a problem could occur. What brought about the apocalypse in the first place? Is it dealt with? Are there more problems that may ...

You know your parents/teachers best. You might want to bring it up to them- "mom, dad, if I'm writing a book about criminals, do you think it's appropriate for me ...

I think it really does depend on how you write it. If the realities are very similar, than it might get very confusing- but if there's obvious differences like say... ...

I'm astonished that this hasn't got any feedback! I think the idea behind the world is pretty interesting. I did find it a little hard to read because it felt ...

Ohhh, I see.

@megsug, I knew someone named Obi once. You could probably have it as something your character finds annoying- that everyone brings up Obi wan to him, perhaps?

Oops, I have something more to say that I realized while... probably showering. What the readers know, doesn't have to be what the characters know. Especially if you're using first ...