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Cool! Thanks. :-P Choppiness is a part of your style? That's both cool and lame at the same time.

Thank you Rosey. That was very, very helpful. I'm now in love with the amazing lady who wrote those two articles, and I'm actually excited about tackling dialogue again. Thank ...

That was once again amazing! Thank you.

O.O Thank you, so freakin' much for writing this. This was so helpful.

Oh, and I'm really good at grammar and spelling. If you don't believe me, look at the title. -_-

I've been taking some time to read some of my writing lately, and I've been noticing just how crappy it all is. My characters are so socially awkward when they ...

By all means, keep looking! They're just suggestions. :-P ( I agree about the Kasha thing... don't want your bad guy reminding people of cereal )

I have a few name suggestions: The princess: Waverly, or Chell... are you OK with made-up names? Because Chell's one ( I think ). The Writer: I want to say ...

Oh, that's weird... just a little bit ago the posts were all touching... and now I look like a bleeding heart! XP ^

I think that this thread is getting hurt by all the codes... Threads have feelings too.

Honestly, I don't think we can really give you advice on that, because we're not in your head. I don't really understand the plot ( maybe that's just me ), ...

It seems to me that Abel is a little unbalanced. He seems like he's a very very sad character, with not many other emotions other than love and anger. I ...

What's High Fantasy?

I drank cider once and thought a block of wood was my son. That's not something to be proud of, Alex! XD I don't remember the first time I tried ...

I just went over there - cause I was curious - and I couldn't even sign up. It doesn't seem very user-friendly. But that's all I know about it.