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Meh.. not my kind of thing. I'm sure a lot of other people like it though!

Whoa. This is one of the few slow-starting stories that have really gripped me. Your characters seem real, your grammar is nearly flawless, and so is your spelling. This is ...

AHH! Thank you! I love it when people review me. :) So far I only have one chapter of one book out (I'm a new user) and I need people ...

Um, sort of interesting, but kind of redundant. He continually kisses her neck over and over again, which seems sort of like a time filler. If some guy kissed my ...

This is awesome! I love the mysteriousness of it. It made me want to learn more. Like the review above me said, you need to change the beginning a little. ...

Grammar. Grammar, grammar, grammar. I would have liked to enjoy it more, but the grammar was so patchy that it took away from the story. I hate to say this, ...

Oh, how to begin this review? You did wonderful! There is a lot to say that you did great- I love your descriptions, smooth wording, etc. But there are also ...

Wow... that was awesome! I love all your descriptions, and the beginning had a nice punch to it. I'm even the kind of person who likes to skim over things ...

It's a very good story, all in all. It's just not the thing that I normally would read. I love the plot, but I'm not the kind of reader to ...

I slam the large wooden door with a franticness I've never experienced before. I grab the lantern and try to light it, but it takes me three tries because my ...

That was amazing! I love the subject, I love your descriptions, I love it! The only thing I found was a mis-spelling of the word fair, which was spelled fare ...

It's a pretty good story, all in all. Nice concept, very cute! It was pretty great. I only noticed one thing I didn't like. You seem to have fallen into ...